Memory of week 3 (12/10/2009)

In week three, I had to changed my storyline again, because Johnny said he didn't like the young martial artist is just going to challenge the monk without any praticullar reason, and without saying any things. But in my opinion, I think it is a reason for the young martial artist to challenge the monk, because simply when a martial artist get to meet another stronger martist artist, they should just fight and enjoy it. But Johnny think it would ruin my story, and I thought I should really take the advise from a professional, so I agree to change my storyline, and give it a more obvious reason for the young martial artist to challenge the monk.

So I have change the beginning, the young martial artist have now became the student of the monk. Story begin with the young martial artist have won the World Champion Title not long ago, and now he return to his master, he wanted to defeat his master too so he can prove that he is the strongest one.

Johnny and Rob like pefere this storyline, I show it to a few of my colleagues, they prefere this one as well so I believe to change my story line is the best thing to do.

I've also been saked to script writng in squares by Johnny too, so I've done them in the same week.