Some random arts when I was in Nick lesson.In the fourth week, I spoke to one of my tutor(couldn't remember which one was) about my story again, he said that it was such a pity for the young martial artist to be defeat by his master simply in one strike, and it would be far too depressing for the audience.
So I decided to change my story again, from the scene when theyoung martial artist was defeated by his master, his master gave him a hand and help him up. After the master is asking the young martial artist to look at the mountain, when he turn around and look at his student, the young martial artist punch him in the face. Then the Master will kill him in the chest and he fly and hit a tree. This bit is gonna showed the young martial artist have actually achieved somethings instead of just being defated(In a nasty way though).
But I've spoke to Rob about these idea, and he thought these idea are unnecessary, it will make the young martial artsit become a nasty person. Oh~~~ It's so true though, I don't wanna give the young martial artist a nasty personality, so I've decided delete this idea, and just carry on let the ending become depressing as it should be.
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