



Also have some concept art done.




I've also managed to finish my second animatic, I have changed the dialog into a perfect English form, make sure there are no spelling mistake, wrong grammar or and funny English.
And also I have rearrange some scenes, this time the animatic won't go any longer than 3 mins.
But I don't think people are too appreciate about it this time... Should I take Adam advise and just keep those bad English dialogs as they were??